值得拥有的托福写作小知识No.1—兰州环球教育


值得拥有的托福写作小知识no.1
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如何用程度副词增加托福文章的文采
在托福的教学过程中,当学生能写出没有什么语法错误的句子,我一般会鼓励他们适当增加程度副词或程度形容词的使用。这些小小的词汇会让作文读起来精彩纷呈。下面举个段落例子。
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该主体段例子是针对以下这个题目的:
schools(universities, colleges, and high schools) should teach students about specific careers and jobs instead of general subjects.
作者的立场是反对。
additionally, we must remember that changing careers would be incredibly difficult if people had little or no knowledge about other subjects. without this basic knowledge, people would find it virtually impossible suddenly to quit one career and begin another. i have read about businessmen who quit their jobs to become teachers and scientists who decide they want to run a company. fortunately for them, they have some basic knowledge from taking many different classes, so they can make these changes. if people only study one subject at school, however, they will practically never be able to change even if they strongly dislike their chosen career.
此处incredibly, virtually, practically, 以及strongly的使用增加了程度和语气,能够体现书写者的英文功力。
以下再列举几个例子
no.1
i strongly believe students should take a wide range of courses and not merely take classes they need for their careers since knowing about many subjects makes well-balanced, educated people and helps them change careers and solve difficult problems.
no.2
therefore, it is far better to receive advice from friends who are older than you than from peers.
no.3
old people definitely know more about relationships than younger people do.
no.4
my friends of my age are much better able to give me helpful advice than people who are a few years older than me.
no.5
this is a tremendous change from times in the past.  (程度形容词)
no.6
this is simply not the case any more.
no.7
however, parents now merely send their children to daycare centers.
no.8
while my grandparents are wonderful, loving people, they live several hours away from us. we typically only see them on holidays or occasions like weddings or funerals. they have virtually no influence on me or anyone in my family. while this was not the case in the past, it is definitely true for many people today.
no.9
it is clear that extended family members are not nearly as important as they once were.
no.10
since my friends of my own age also have the same experiences as i do, they know exactly how i feel about my problems.
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