bad example:
well i was born in new york but my family moved to iowa when i was young. i always wanted to be an engineer but when i started university i realized i loved biology. oh, that reminds me, during university i had this amazing travel abroad experience …
good example:
i’ve been working as a (marketing manager)at tencent a for 2 years and my duties included (online promotion) for a popular app. i have always been interested in (marketing technology and online media) which was why i chose to follow this career path. i studied at (university of international business and economics;), where i gained my (master degree).
good example:
i’ve been working in a us based marketing research company for nearly 8 years. in my most recent position, i’ve become an expert on marketing research specialized in auto industry . we impacts companies who have big ambition to expand their marketing share in china. just this past year i contributed significant research and marketing advice to a listed company and we were succeed.